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i could love you
drugs and all.
extend my arm to you
it could bring us together
a repulsive threesome
and i'll fuck you slowly
for hours
with all of your
influences possessing me
and you
sucking me dry
until i collapse into myself
your perfect romance
rot and die with you
side by side...well
i'm not a romantic.
rot alone, my darling
©2007-2009 ~etherealbeing
:iconetherealbeing:

Author's Comments

*shrugs*

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:icondanteholic:
lol
loved your ending

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"Let your words be fitting".
Inferno Canto X
:icondarkfairy22389:
this is great! i love this because i can relate to it. the ending was really neat how you turned it around. i saw it going one way to this romantic ending in death, but then the speaker turned into a cynic and was basically like "fuck you. go die" im more fond of the beginning and the end. somewhere in the middle it kinda lost my attention, but snapped me right back with "and you/sucking me dry"

i rambled, i know. but thats proof of how much i really like this piece

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Love like Winter
:icondarckazuee:
Such beautiful Irony... heh heh

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:yoda: dattebayo my young padawan!
:iconfrankienexus:
nice and strong
cruel is often the best and cruelty
with a shrug cuts
even deeper
cleaner
i like this

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I love your comments and your textures
:iconetherealbeing:
my cruelty with a shrug is long overdue for the situation i was writing about, and i like it so much cuz to me it represents the upper hand, realization, strength, wisdom with the whole thing that i've welcomed into myself. i'm glad you liked it :)

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lights will guide you home
and ignite your bones
and i will try to fix you
:iconetherealbeing:
:) thanks for reading

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lights will guide you home
and ignite your bones
and i will try to fix you
:iconetherealbeing:
oh thank you for rambling, i appreciate your time and thoughts :). i'm very glad you liked it so much, and thank you for the detailed comment.

("fuck you. go die" hahaha...)

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lights will guide you home
and ignite your bones
and i will try to fix you
:iconetherealbeing:
:) hehe...thank you for reading.

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lights will guide you home
and ignite your bones
and i will try to fix you
:iconkirk83:
Kinda sad but really true, but at the same time glad u feel that way.......although this is an old piece

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